User blog comment:Arthur Read fan/The Thanksgiving Incident: An ARTHUR Thanksgiving Fanfiction/@comment-28908621-20191128115533

I don't really see many errors in this story (but then again I don't really consider myself a good critic), but two things I'd like to point out are that "breakfast" shouldn't start with a capital "B", and "DW" is actually supposed to be spelled as "D.W."

By the way, is this your first ever fanfiction, or have you written them before?